Hi Punit. Thank you for your kind words. I read yours - The Quarrel. Admire the thought that went into it. It is not easy to rhyme dialogue and have it sound natural. Very successful. I subscribed.
Beautiful, Suzanne. And a very nice way to look at this. All these examples listed. And you manage to pace it so nicely. I felt some time pressure while reading. Great job.
Have you seen Punit Thakkar's recent poem on more or less the same subject? It's a very nice one, and it's great to see how two poets have their own way of working with the same theme. Check it out here: https://hellouniverse.substack.com/p/the-quarrel
Got here thanks to Arjan's recommendation. Great poem, beautiful perspective!
Hi Punit. Thank you for your kind words. I read yours - The Quarrel. Admire the thought that went into it. It is not easy to rhyme dialogue and have it sound natural. Very successful. I subscribed.
Beautiful, Suzanne. And a very nice way to look at this. All these examples listed. And you manage to pace it so nicely. I felt some time pressure while reading. Great job.
Have you seen Punit Thakkar's recent poem on more or less the same subject? It's a very nice one, and it's great to see how two poets have their own way of working with the same theme. Check it out here: https://hellouniverse.substack.com/p/the-quarrel
Hi Arjan. Thank you. I find time a fascinating topic. Thanks to for the link to Punit. Love his poem and subscribed.
as Autumn slips her foot in Summer’s door. Very lovely image.
Thank you for writing about time. It fascinates all of us.